Monday, 10 October 2011

Script - Draft


FADE IN:
SC1–INT-Grocery’s room-Day
Miss Grocery dresses up in her room. Checking herself in the mirror.
miss grocery
Wow! I’m really am super sexy huh.
Miss Grocery look at herself and turn around proudly for having a nice body.

SC2-EXT-Town-Day
Miss Grocery is on her way to the market and she would walk passed the town to know different guys at a time.
miss grocery
Hey you! What are you doing here? Tell me that you’re alone. I love to date single guys. (Wink)
Street guy
Hmm (Looking at Miss Grocery from top to bottom) You’re hot aren’t you.
miss grocery
(Laughing) Well, I get that a lot.

SC3-EXT-Outside Market-Day
All the male workers from the market was gathering outside the Market. Miss Grocery approached to the guys.
miss grocery
Hey boys. (Putting her hands around one of the guy’s shoulder) What are you guys up to?
Workers
We’re waiting for you of course!
Miss Grocery
(Giggle) Awww, how sweet can you boys be.
Workers
Hey, let’s go in. I’m feeling hot out here.
Miss Grocery
I feel you. (Staring at the guy with her naughty looks)

SC4-EXT-inside Market-Day
Miss Grocery walked towards the market. Once Miss Grocery stepped in, all the ladies immediately leave the market.
Workers
Hey, we need to start working or else we’ll be dead if the boss finds out.
All the workers start working but accept for one. Shawn, the apple stays with Miss Grocery.
Shawn (apple)
Should I go as well? (Feeling stress)
Miss Grocery
Try to relax. (Moving her hands around him) Why not we go to the corner side of the market? They won’t find out, trust me.
Miss Grocery pulled Shawn along to the corner side. While they both were walking, Miss Naina saw them. Miss Naina is unhappy about the fact that Miss Grocery gets every guys for herself. Miss Grocery didn’t realize that she had one enemy who would compete with her.

FADE IN:
SC5-INT-Miss Naina’s apartment-Night
Miss Naina sat on her sofa with her television on. At the same time, she was thinking about the plan that she were up to.
Miss naina (banana)
What should I do to be just like her?
After a few minutes, her idea came up.
Miss Naina (Banana)
Uh-huh! That will be fun. (Evil laugh)
SC6-ext-town-day
Miss Naina was on her way to the market. She has confidence in herself to defeat Miss Grocery. She is eager to get to the market.
SC7-ext-In the market-day
Miss Naina reached the market before Miss Grocery does. While Miss Naina waited for Miss Grocery to turn up, she finds a place where she could hide from Miss Grocery.

SC8-EXT-In the market-Day
Miss Grocery turns up after a few minutes. She went in happily with the guys surrounding her. While Miss Grocery was having a conversation with the guys, Miss Naina appeared from the back and starts to call the boys by whistling to them.
(Whistling sound)
All the guys turn their head around. Their face changed, their jaw drop down once they saw Miss Naina half bare. The looks on Miss Naina draw the guys towards her.
Miss grocery
(Speechless)
Workers
Woah! (Noisy conversation)
The guys approached Miss Naina and left Miss Grocery. Miss Naina keeps on showing her body to the guys and Miss Grocery seems unhappy about it.

SC9-EXT-In the market-Day
Miss Grocery was too angry to stay and she decided to leave the market at once.

SC10–EXT-In the market-Day
Miss Naina was happy to know that she had won the challenge by defeating Miss Grocery. And she decided to plan a night outing with the guys.
Miss naina
Guys! I’m going to have a celebration tonight.
GUYS
Celebration? Tonight?
Miss naina
Yes! Let’s celebrate at my apartment. (Sounds exciting)

FAde In:
SC11–INT-Miss Grocery’s Apartment-Evening
Miss Grocery reached home and banged the door as hard as she could. Miss Grocery can’t control her emotions and anger. She went to the kitchen and gets a cold drink.
Miss grocery
(Gulp gulp) I can’t believe that she  will do this things to me. How could she. I must get the guys back. It’s time for revenge.
(Switch on television)
Miss Grocery sat on the sofa and think. She’s finding an idea on how to get back at Miss Naina.
Miss Grocery
Think think! Think of something.
Gah! I can’t think of anything. (Cover face with pillow)
Suddenly, she looked up and smiling widely. She had a plan and run towards her room.

SC12–EXT-Town, Shopping mall-Day
Miss Grocery went to town to shop for new clothes. She goes to one of the clothes store. Try on different clothing at the same time.
miss grocery
(Talking to herself) What should I wear? I don’t find the clothes that suit me.
Miss Grocery keeps on finding her clothes. And she saw one that attracts her eyes.
Miss Grocery
Uh-huh! This is it. Yes, this is it!
She went straight to the market after she gets her clothes.

SC13–EXT-Market-Day
Miss Grocery went to the market to find Miss Naina. After she had reached the market, she saw Miss Naina with the workers having an exciting conversation. They were laughing loudly. Miss Grocery approached them and started whistling.
(whistling)
miss grocery
Hey boys. (With her seductive voice)
The guys
Erm, hey. (Turn away and continue looking at Miss Naina)
Miss Grocery was disappointed at herself. Miss Naina, looks at Miss Grocery and give her an evil smile. Miss Naina and the guys walk off from Miss Grocery. They went on laughing all the way. Miss Grocery stood there and look at them.

SC14–INT-Miss Grocery’s Apartment-Night
Miss Grocery went home sadly. She sat down on the sofa and think about her future. After a while, she went straight to bed thinking the next morning she would wake up and get a fresh new life.

SC15–INT-Miss Grocery’s room-Day
(alarm clock rings)
Miss Grocery woke up and sees the sunlight went through the window.
miss grocery
Ah, what a beautiful morning. It’s been a long time since I get this feeling. (Smile)
Miss Grocery decided to go to the park to get a fresh air.

SC16–Ext-Park-Day
Miss Grocery sat down on a bench and start a new journey on life which would bring her happiness.

FADE OUT:
The End

One Sentence Summary

Story 1: Chloe was a special kid who have a candy floss hair which have a problem surrounding him.

Story 2: Miss Grocery felt lonely and wanted to feel the love between her and those guys, which will fill her empty heart.

Character Bio:

Miss Grocery (Tomato)
- Round eyes
- Short
- Sexy
- Flirtation
- Self-centered

Miss Naina (Banana)
- Brave
- Genius
- Funny
- Self-centered

Story 3: Mimi was a single child that one day he received a gift which was not an ordinary toy that turn out to be his imaginary friend.

Story 4: A princess who lived with her evil step-father and need a freedom and decides to leave the mansion.

Story 5: Maya and Suzy was a close friend that because of some reason, they became strangers.

Wednesday, 28 September 2011

Class Excercise

HITLER WAS AFRAID OF CATS


Officer: The cats that you imprisoned have escaped.

Hitler: HUH? Did those beasts thought that they could escape from me? Those fools!

The Officer Nods

Hitler: Then I want my armed soldiers to take action this instant!  Do you think that I’ve stayed here because I have a lot of work to do? That’s a lie! Because of their furry face, I’m terrified! Terrified! Terrified!


By: Badriyah, Mastura, Clement, Jun Jie &  Gilang.

Tuesday, 27 September 2011

Story 5: Loving the Life of Maya


This story is about a two friend which was close enough to call a Best friend. Main character would be Maya and her friend Suzy. Maya had known Suzy for almost 3 years. They met during their college days. During their college days when they still in first year, they both were actually enemy. Suzy had a conflict between her and their classmates that Maya intend to avoid her. Maya thought that Suzy was a backstabber and a person who could not be trusted. Maya do have a special gift by reading someone’s attitude, character. That time, Maya believed that she’s someone who is not a trustworthy. Everyone who knows Suzy would talk, tell about her doings. Suzy became lonely for quite a long time. Until one day, she decided to befriend with Maya, not because of money or any special reason. It is just about Maya personalities that she decides to stay with her. Slowly, Suzy changed to a better person. Maya and Suzy did not expect that they would stay together until now. After their graduation, they both became busy. Maya met a long lost friend from an online chat room. Maya met her when she was 15 years old. Maya had strong feelings for her during her teenage years but they went separate ways after a few months. Maya had a special reason for having someone special that have the same gender as her. It is not her fault for being that way. At first, Maya when on a date with her for around 1 week. They got attached on the following weeks. They both met in real life and promise each other to be together until the last breath. After months, Maya and Suzy planning to meet up and when to watch a movie. Every problem that Suzy is facing, she would share with Maya. Suzy had a fight with her boyfriend. It was a serious problem. That time Suzy was depressed and she needs someone to be there for her. So Maya was the one who had stayed with her. Every day, Maya would listen to her problems. Until one day, Suzy confessed her feelings towards Maya. Maya was really shocked until she went speechless. Suzy was expecting Maya to accept her as her girlfriend. But Maya reject her. Maya did not tell her about her relationship with a girl. Maya went straight home not feeling anything but angry to herself. Suzy kept on texting her but Maya did not reply a single message. Maya told her girlfriend about it and she told Maya to avoid Suzy. Suzy would not give up and she keep on pester Maya for an answer. Maya cannot take it, she decide to meet Suzy. When Maya met Suzy, Maya told Suzy that she is in a relationship with a girl whom she loved. Suzy became angry. Suzy let her anger out on Maya. They both started to fight. But Maya decides to walk out on Suzy. Maya when home and Suzy keep on texting her by saying hurtful things to hurt Maya. Maya did cry for a while. Suzy told Maya that it is better for them to go on a separate ways rather than being together. Maya hate this idea of separating. Maya turned weak because of a friendship that she treasures a lot. Suzy insist on going separate ways. At the end, Maya gave up and decides to move on without a close friend. Bit by bit, Maya adapt everything. Maya life became peaceful without Suzy pestering her. Maya was faithful to her lovely girlfriend until now.

Story 4: A Princess with Her Pure Heart


In a small country there lived a girl who is a princess named Pauline. She lived in a luxurious mansion with her butlers, maids and her evil step-father. Pauline’s dad has passed on when she was 3 years old and her mom died of an illness. Pauline is not the only child, she do have a brother and a sister but they are studying abroad. She had been alone for quite long years.  She does not look like the other princesses who have an amazing looks. Even though she may not have a beautiful face, she had a pure heart. Ever since she was born, she was not allowed to leave the mansion. She had never experience the lives of having a freedom. One of her butler who was named, Carl sympathise her and he tried to help her from getting her to leave the mansion. But Carl had no idea to help her get out from the mansion. Pauline’s step-father was an alcoholic. Every night he would invite his friends over and get drunk together. He does not allow Pauline to leave the room when his friends are around.  One day, Pauline felt that she had to leave the mansion to get some fresh air outside and decided to call Carl to her room to help her from getting out from the mansion. Carl help Pauline by dressing her up as a butler. Pauline and Carl went out from the room and rushed to the main door. When they was about to open the door, Pauline step-father appeared from the living room drunkenly. Pauline and Carl was shocked and almost out of breath. Her step-father started to talk nonsense and when he was about to walk towards Pauline, he fainted. Pauline and Carl quickly opened the door and ran out. Carl told Pauline that there was a security guarding the gate. Carl try to think of a way to get the guard out of there. Pauline had an idea, and she suddenly shouted for help. Carl appearance had change while he was in shock. The security ran towards them and Pauline told him that her step-father had fainted. The security dashed into the main door. Carl grab Pauline’s hand and ran towards the gate to unlock the gate. And they were free. They ran as far as they could from the mansion and won’t come back again.

Story 3: Mimi's World

In a planet which was known as unknown planet, there was a 10 year old boy who was named Mimi. He lived with his both parents which were too busy to take notice of Mimi. Mimi was a lonely child whom does not have any friends to talk to. During Christmas, while his parents were away from home he received an unexpected present in his doorstep. He grab the present and when back to his room. He stared at the present awhile thinking that whether he should unwrap it or not. He decided not to unwrap it and he kept it under his bed. When night came, he was about to sleep he heard some noise. He is not sure where the noise came from. He recalled about the unexpected present and look under his bed. When he was about to look under his bed, he saw a bright light coming from the present. He jumped off his bed and took out the present. He promptly unwrapped the present. He was surprised to see an incredible strange toy popping out of the present. The toy was staring at Mimi with an innocent looks on his face. The toy is made up of metal and it came out alive. Mimi was shocked about the toy but after a while, he declared the toy as his new friend. He was glad that he had met his first friend which was the toy. Mimi took all his toys out to play. While he was busy playing with the toy, his parents came back and saw Mimi was talking by himself. Mimi did not realized that his parents was home. Mimi’s parents went inside his room and asked him who was he talking to. He replied confidently to his parents and introduced the toy to them. They was shocked to hear that he befriend with the imaginary toy. Mimi’s dad became angry and took the toy away from Mimi and decided to throw it away. Mimi grabbed his dad’s leg and pleaded from throwing the toy away. His dad pulled him aside and beat him. Mimi’s mum pitied him and tried to stop her husband from beating Mimi. Mimi pushed his dad and ran away from home. Mimi’s mum tried to convince her husband to give Mimi back the toy but her husband refused. She explained to her husband that Mimi was feeling lonely without any siblings or friends by his side and her husband felt sympathized for Mimi’s loneliness and decided to find Mimi. They went to the playground to search for Mimi and saw Mimi sitting on the swing. His dad approached to Mimi and approved of Mimi having the imaginary friend and returned back his toy. Mimi hugged hus dad and thanked him fro accepting the imaginary friend.

Sunday, 21 August 2011

Story 2: Miss Grocery The Tomato

Miss Grocery is a cute, petite lady with big round eyes. She loves to wear thick make ups and she fancy wearing tight clothing. She has the attractive looks that would draw guys towards her. She would behaves and act differently when she is with a guy.

Miss Grocery, who is known as the sexiest lady, lives in a small town where everyone knows her. Her mission is to flirt around with the guys in town. Every week, without fail, she would go to the nearby market. Her intention is not to shop, but to seduce every male customers and workers around. Every ladies in town despise her as she loves to flirt around with every guys. Every time she went to the market, the ladies happen to leave the market hurrily. Among all the ladies in town, one of them, who is known as Miss Naina the banana happens to be brave enough to compete with Miss Grocery in showing her that not only she alone can flirt with the guys, but she can too.

One day, Miss Grocery went to the market with some of the guys. The rest of the ladies, as always, went away from the market. Happily Miss Grocery and the guys walk around the market to shop for some grocery. Out of the sudden, they heard a whistling sound. As seductive as it sound, the guys turn their head around. Their jaw drop down when they saw Miss Naina half bare, looking so sexy. Without any doubt, the looks on Miss Naina draw the guys towards her. Fuming with anger, Miss Grocery isn't satisfied with Miss Naina doings and she went home feeling upset about it.

The next day, Miss Grocery came up with a plan to get the guys back from Miss Naina. She went out shopping for new clothes, mostly the one that looks attractive enough. After dolling herself up, and putting on tight and short clothing, she went out to find Miss Naina and the guys. When she arrived at the market, she saw Miss Naina and the guys walking around. Without any hesitation, Miss Grocery started whistling to the guys, calling their names seductively. The guys turn around to look at Miss Grocery, and she start winking and giving flying kiss out to the guys. Thinking that Miss Grocery is winning to get the guys back, without any interest, the guys turn back to look at Miss Naina and continue their day walking around the Market. Feeling all disappointed and upset, Miss Grocery gave up on taking any revenge. Not only that, she also gave up with flirting with guys around town. She started to wear comfortable clothing instead of her old tight clothing. She learn her lesson well that flirting with the guys bring her nowhere near happiness.

Miss Grocery felt lonely and wanted to feel the love between her and those guys, which will fill her empty heart.

Story 1: The Candy Floss Boy

Character Bio: Chloe is a chubby boy who is known as the Candy Floss boy. He is a special child with a special identity that no one ever had. He was born naturally with a pink big Candy Floss hair.

Twelve years old Chloe who live with his parents in a small countryside. Chloe is the only child in the family. Chloe was a special boy who was born with a Candy Floss hair. Chloe’s relationship with his mum is good compared to his father. Chloe’s dad seldom comes home. Chloe’s dad does not take him as his child because he’s different from any other children.

In school, Chloe is known as the quietest boy. He does not really mix with his classmates/schoolmates that well. He was an anti-social boy. Every week, his schoolmates will tease him about his hair, body size. His friends would pushed him and once he fall down, they would pull his hair bit by bit. He’s been bullied since the first day of school. He has been ignoring them quite a long time. But now, he’s changed. He’s not afraid of them; he would do anything to protect himself from getting hurt. He wanted to get out from this life and begin with a new life. He thought that making his friends suffer and feel what he has been through is the way to get a better life. He was wrong. He was too carried away until he can’t even think about what will happen to his mum if she knows what her son had done.

The reason why he did all this, it’s because he needs attention from his family, especially his father. After his father can’t accept him as his son, he feels so insecure. That’s the reason why he became an anti-social.

Sunday, 7 August 2011

Meaning of it..

Logline - A logline is a one sentence summary of the pitch for a proposed film on television program.

Synopsis - A brief summary of a story.

Character Bio - Is the personality of the Character.

Storyline - Is an introduction of a story.

Scene Breakdown - Scene outline.

Beats - A beat is a unit of a scene in a story where there is an exchange between the characters and the action, reaction, revelation advances the story and shape the turning of the scene.

Plots/ Sub Plots - A plot is the main idea of the story that based on conflict.

Turning Points - Usually an event where the plot takes an sometimes unexpected turn and things change.

Script - The written text of a play, movie or broadcast. An automated series of instructions carried out in a specific order.

Hook - Is what makes the story relevant.

Motive - Purpose that cause a person to act in a certain way.

Conflict - Faces difficulty.

Dramatic Sequence - Dramatic used in a scene that is representative of power and social standing.

Resolution - The resolution is the end of the story. It occurs after the Climax. What happens to the characters after Conflict is resolved.

Outcome - The result of performance in terms of success and failure.

Monday, 1 August 2011

Someone Whom I Know


Character E
- Nice, Friendly, Sweet, Easy-going, Trustworthy, Likes cute stuff, Easily get weak, Dislike backstabbers.

Character S
- Friendly, Noisy, Likes to joke, Hot-tempered, Attitude problem, Trustworthy, Shopaholic.

They would approach the empty seats and one of them would give up the seats to find another empty seats. At the same time the owner of the tissue paper came back and their reaction change to confusion. The owner of the tissue paper invited them to join him instead of waiting for another seats.